Special Post: OC Fair Submissions

Well, its time of year to start thinking about the OC Fair! Below are the paintings that I would like to submit to the Gallery. Any feedback? I can submit all four and the deadline is tomorrow. So speak up, and speak fast. Thank you!

Spiral

I'm not sure if its expanding or collapsing.

Cracked

Will I wake up?
Is it a dream I made up?
No, I guess it's reality.